My fingers unintentionally reached for my blade, only to find it not there.
"Speak!" the man roared.
Though I tried, my tongue remained stiff as cardboard.
He raised his saber hilt downward, and I closed my eyelids tight and held my breath, hoping it was a dream, but my lights blinked out with a thud and I fell to the ground.
I hope you're planning on posting more! I'm on the edge of my seat already!
ReplyDeleteOooh! What happens next?!
ReplyDeletenow what?
ReplyDeleteI love anything that sound like a good book/post.
ReplyDeleteoh my gosh!!! whats gonna happen???
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work.
+Flamingo Pink+
http://songs2myheart.blogspot.com
Great blog, i follow you know! :)
ReplyDeletei can't wait till you post the second part ~ i wanna know what happens next.
Ceanna
http://daydreamjournal2.blogspot.com
I would like to find out what happens next too!! Hint hint hint hint hint!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAre you ever going to finish this?
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